Friday, August 08, 2008

Kamal ani Pani

Kamal panyat budat nahi … kiwwa pani tayla budwat nahi.
panyacha tyachawar khup prem aahe …. Ka panyacha nailaj aahe ?
ani nailaj nasta tar tyane budawla asta ?
kamalasathi kay changlay he kon tharawnar ? kamal ? pan tyane tar budun pahilach nahiye.
Kamal budat nahi hyat haar nakki kunachi aahe …. Panyachi ki Kamalachi … ?Kadachit 'haar' ha shabd chuktoy ... Premat haar nastech ... kiwwa nasawi .. mahit nahi
Panyane he sweekarawe ki kamal budnar nahi ... karan kahihi aso.
Mag kamalane kay karawe ? Tyacha pan panyawarti prem aahe na .... Tyala awadta ka panyala dukhawna ? .... Mag te ka Budat nahi ? Kamal budala tar te kamal rahil ? Nahi ...
Pan panyane tar kamalawar prem kelay .. kamal kamal rahilach nahi tar panyala te awdel ?
Mag panyala nakki kay haway ?
Me sangu ...
Dukkha :)
Karan Pani mhanala na te masochist aahe


Kyun Naye Naye se Dard ki Firaq mein talash mein udaas hain dil ..


PS : Khara sangaycha tar .. Panyala character chi garaj aahe .. Mhanje tyala kunalach budawta yenar nahi . kunala budwawa asa watnar pan nahi

PPS : Panyala character milala tar panyacha kamlawar prem rahil ka ?

Independence madhe detachment naste ka ?

Mag detach jhalyawar te prem kasa urel ?

PPPS : Mag prem mhanje faqt 'soy' aahe ka ?

5 comments:

Indrani said...

Is it necessary to analyse love the way you have?
Try to keep it simple and beautiful. Don't complicate things so much.

आश्लेषा said...

independent hoNa mhaNaje sagaLe paash todaNa asa thodach ahe? independent zalat tari ashi ek jaga asu shakate jithe tumhi _knowingly_ swatala surrender kelay...just because u love him/her..

siddhya said...

kamaL male aNi paNi female ka? :P

love and freedom are not juxtaposed (damn! i wanted to use tht word somewhere :D) i think freedom is lost on ego and so is love. if you have no ego, only then can u love and still be free.

Sushant said...
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Bhram said...

Prem kamalacha panywar ahe...
Panyashivaaay te jagu shakat nahi....
Pani ahe toparyant kamal ahe...
Panisuddha kamalavar prem kartay, mhanun itaranna budavanare pani kamalala maatra budavat nahi...
doghancha swatantr astitva ahe, shavasacha sukhahi ahe...
Pramaat dumbana mhanje ekmekaansathi jagana, ekmekansobat jagana... te tar doghahi karat ahetach...